October 16, 2020
It's interesting to me how games handle swarms of things: bugs, piranhas, spiders, birds, and so on. They're a classic threat, but the rules to support them vary widely between systems. Here's what's generally the same:
* They fill an area like a bigger creature. Even though individual swarm members are really small, the swarm itself is the size of a large creature (sometimes, its squares can bend around a lot, so long as they're contiguous).
* They can fit through small spaces, and other creatures can fit in their space along with them (though they might get bitten/stung to do so!).
* There are too many of them to count. This generally makes them immune to single-target spells like disintegrate, and sometimes makes them more susceptible to area-effect spells like fireball.
Different game systems have different rules for swarms.
D&D 5E lists the "size" as something like "Medium swarm of Tiny beasts" to let you know how small the swarm's critters are and how big the swarm itself is. Swarms also get a "swarm" trait that usually reads the same: "The swarm can occupy another creature's space and vice versa, and the swarm can move through any openings large enough for a Tiny creature. The swarm can't regain hit points or gain temporary hit points." They're resistant to physical damage (bludgeoning, piercing, and slashing attacks) and immune to lots of conditions that would usually affect a single target, like being charmed or paralyzed or knocked prone. A swarm attacks like a normal creature, but does less damage if reduced to half its hit points or fewer (to reflect the fewer number of viable creatures in the swarm, presumably). All the rules are right there in the monster stat block.
Pathfinder First Edition has...problems. "Swarm" is a subtype, and although the stat blocks of most swarms aren't large, the description of the subtype is almost a full page of text. That's a ludicrous amount of detail, and it usually means going back to the book when running a swarm. Swarms are resistant to weapon attacks, but some swarms are wholly immune to weapon damage. Some of these very low-CR monsters, which has spelled death for many characters and led to a paranoid fixation on grabbing splash weapons (like alchemist's fire) as soon as possible in an adventurer's career. That doesn't seem good for the game.
Starfinder has some of the same architecture as Pathfinder 1st Edition, but it breaks up the pieces into "Swarm Attack," "Swarm Defenses," and "Swarm Immunities," which seems a little easier in play--you don't have to reference a full page, just the relevant section (attack when it's the swarm's turn, defenses and immunities when the heroes are trying to do something to the swarm). It's still a full column of text in total, though. There are also more rules for a swarm subtype graft, which loops in lots of the complications from Pathfinder First Edition.
Pathfinder Second Edition makes things a little easier. Swarm is a trait, but it's only three sentences long: "A swarm is a mass or cloud of creatures that functions as one monster. Its size entry gives the size of the entire mass, though for most swarms the individual creatures that make up that mass are Tiny. A swarm can occupy the same space as other creatures, and must do so in order to use its damaging action. A swarm typically has weakness to effects that deal damage over an area (like area spells and splash weapons)." Swarms usually have a "swarm mind" ability, making them immune to mental effects that target a specific number of creatures. They're usually immune to precision damage, have a weakness to area damage and splash damage (as the trait recommends), and have resistance to physical damage (though resistance to bludgeoning damage is usually lower, presumably because it's easier to smash up swarm critters than stab them). I wish "swarm mind" was right in the stat block--it's not that hard to say "immune to mental effects that target a specific number of creatures"--because this would then almost be as easy to use in play as D&D 5E.
Torg Eternity has "swarm" as one of its few creature special abilities: "Swarms are composed of hordes of smaller, individual creatures. Eliminating one, or even dozens has no real effect on the swarm as a whole. Unarmed and crushing weapons deal base damage normally. Area attacks deal damage normally. Blades, bullets, or weapons that can't hit dozens of creatures at once deal no damage at all. Each round, any character in contact with the swarm on its turn suffers two Shock. Large swarms have +5 Shock and +2 Wounds." Actual swarm monsters give this in shorthand, although they don't always follow these rules, making it puzzling why it would be set out with such specificity as a special ability if it was deployed differently in practice.
That's what swarms are all about; I'll talk next time about applying these rules to make lots of other swarm creatures--swarms of swarms, you could say.
Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
October 9, 2020
One of the way Torg feels different than a lot of other RPGs is in its transparency. Simply put, mechanical information (such as the difficulty of a check) isn't secret. Here's how the game's rulebook puts it:
TransparencyMechanical information isn't meant to be secret in
Torg Eternity. How many Possibilities a foe currently has, what an enemy's various defenses are, and what modifiers apply any given DN [Difficulty Number] should all be apparent or freely shared if the players ask. All four s...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : Torg
October 5, 2020
It's always a thrill when something I've been working on comes out to the public. It's even more thrilling when several things hit at once!
First of all,
here's the October product announcement for Paizo. I worked on the first book listed (
Lost Omens Pathfinder Society Guide), and I wrote BOTH of the adventures premiering this month:
Dominion's End for Starfinder, and
Assault on Hunting Lodge Seven for Pathfinder. Both are great adventures, but they're very different. One is an ultra-high-leve...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : Announcements
September 30, 2020
Well, after an exhausting push through this weekend and into this week, I've completed and turned in my Starfinder Adventure Path volume kicking off an as-yet-unannounced Adventure Path. I think it's among the best Starfinder AP volumes I've written; it had the potential for being really scattered and disjointed, but I had a few overall framing things and interconnections that I think tie it all together well. My developer will be the first judge of that, and the players will be the second.
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : Paizo
September 24, 2020
The
Pathfinder Bestiary and
Pathfinder Bestiary 2 have a ton of great monsters in them. There are old standbys, like giants and golems and froghemoths and stuff, and there are Paizo creations like goblin dogs, reefclaws, and sinspawn. But there are also plenty of brand-new critters in there as well, like the ostrich-like cauthooj and the limb-ripping mukradi. Where do these monsters come from?
The alphabet.
I'm not just being glib. If you look at the placement of these new monsters--all of whi...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
September 21, 2020
I was talking to another freelancer recently. She was populating a settlement in something she's writing and was asking how two unusual ancestries might interact with each other. I didn't know, but I saw a larger issue and asked how many of the NPCs were human. She said not many, because there are so many interesting ancestries available, and asked how many
should be human.
My answer? Just about all of the NPCs should be human. Definitely at least 50 percent. Maybe more like 90 percent. This h...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
September 15, 2020
I talked recently about removing "the" from your writing to avoid "othering" certain groups, but this is only one of several words I search for when tightening up some text. Here are three more:
Will: RPG writing is in present tense. You don't say, "the count will reveal his plan to the party," or "if the party stops fighting, the ogres will listen to what they have to say." Put these in present tense: "the count reveals his plan to the party," "if the party stops fighting, the ogres listen to...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
September 10, 2020
I'm writing another Starfinder Adventure Path adventure. It's not announced yet, but I don't think I'm doing the company any harm by saying I'm writing for them again. I don't think anyone is betting that Starfinder is going to quit doing Adventure Paths, or that they're going to quit arranging for and assigning them behind the scenes, before a public announcement. So I can't yet say what it is, I can say I'm writing a Starfinder adventure.
I just turned in my milestone--about half my total wo...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
September 2, 2020
I wrote recently,
right here, about Paizo updating its Community Use Policy (or CUP). This is the policy that lets fans use their rules and their intellectual property, so long as the end user isn't charged for them. Functionally, it's about giving guidelines and comfort to creators of fan-made websites and videos (and other content, but this seems to be their new thrust).
They've made some further changes to it, although the specifics are tucked into a forum post. I want to walk through these...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : The Law
August 27, 2020
Here's a quick tip today: I've been learning a lot recently about the phenomenon of "othering," which is setting a specific group apart because of its differences, almost always to treat them badly or dismiss their opinions or values. This is particularly damaging when applied to real-world people, because it's been used to justify all kinds of odious abuses (to ethnic minorities, to the physically or mentally disabled, and so on). Language that "others" is subtle but pervasive.
Here's a trick...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
August 25, 2020
I'm doing some freelance writing for an upcoming Pathfinder Second Edition book that is going to have lots and lots of spells in it. My assignment is to write lots and lots of spells.
Although I have plenty of neat and thematic new spell ideas, I like to look over existing spells not only to make sure I'm not reinventing the wheel, but to see whether any of them spark any further ideas. I thought I had found a particularly good design space in creating an aggressive opposite of the longstandin...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
August 12, 2020
Paizo has two overall licenses for people to use:
The
Compatibility License allows you to make products that use their rules and charge money for them; you can't generally use their intellectual property (proper names, etc.). Those of us producing 3PP (Third-Party Press) materials, like Run Amok Games, use this license.
The
Community Use Policy (or CUP) outlines how you can use their rules and their intellectual property for fan-made stuff. You get to use their intellectual property and even s...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : The Law
August 7, 2020
Including NPCs in a game seems easy: you just slap a name on a stat block and you're done. This is Gobgor the goblin, who fights the heroes. This is Shopkor the shopkeeper, who sells stuff to the heroes.
I'm not going to get into naming NPCs well; I'm actually not very good at it. But there are easy steps to make any NPC evocative and useful at the table. This is particularly important when you're writing adventures, because the NPCs need to be simple (because some GMs and players will blithel...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
July 28, 2020
I was explaining the differences between the two licenses Paizo offers to a friend of mine the other day, and I thought a quick summary of them would be helpful.
The
Compatibility License is for professional publishers who want to make money from their products. This lets you use the Pathfinder (or Starfinder, which has its own similar license) rules and claim compatibility with the game. You don't get to use any intellectual property (or, properly, "Product Identity") in them. So you can writ...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
July 21, 2020
There are not a lot of rules similarities between Pathfinder Second Edition and Dungeons and Dragons 5th Edition, but I've recently noticed one very significant similarity when designing adventures for each system.
They both usually handle sandbox adventures very well--with certain limits.
I've talked about sandbox adventures before; they're the kind of adventures where the heroes can go anywhere they want in a large area and follow up on whichever leads strike their fancy. It's a lot of choice...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
July 14, 2020
I posted last Friday about how I was going to write a 5,000-word adventure over the weekend. How did it go? Somewhere right between "okay" and "good." Here's the rundown.
As I mentioned, I knew that the introduction would be about 500 words (it's 430) and the final ambush encounter would be about 1,000 words (it's 1,130). On Saturday, I wrote all of that, then I started writing in more detail about the ogre keep. (Remember, the middle part of my adventure was divided up into "ogre keep" and "s...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
July 10, 2020
Happy Friday! This weekend, I'm writing a 5,000-word adventure. It's for a really neat project, and I'm collaborating with some fun people. I thought it might be helpful to let you know my process. Rather than, "eh, it'll get done this weekend," I'm being quite rigorous about preparation and planning the execution. Here's how I'll do it.
Understand the Parameters. I already know the adventure is for 5,000 words, is for Pathfinder Second Edition, and is fundamentally about attacking a caravan o...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
July 8, 2020
Here's a slight deviation from my standard "so you're an RPG writer" advice, but it touches on the two pillars of my professional life: gaming and the law.
There's been a big push in actual-play podcasting in the last few years. I'm even part of one myself (it's an awesome Starfinder campaign, and you can
find our episodes here). With more people meeting virtually, I've heard more people considering recording and uploading their games as actual-play podcasts. This is fun, and the tech availabl...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : The Law
June 27, 2020
I've just finished an important work project, although it's something I can't talk much about just yet. We've announced our upcoming three-part Adventure Paths: the dungeon-themed
Abomination Vaults Adventure Path, which I'm developing, and the martial-arts-tournament-themed
Fists of the Ruby Phoenix Adventure Path, which my friend and coworker Patrick is developing. As will surprise no one, I've been hard at work putting together the outline for the Adventure Path after that one, which we ha...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
June 24, 2020
I recently contributed to an awesome project that is Kickstarting now. The Book of Dungeon Encounters is a collection of system-neutral dungeon encounters you can drop into any dungeon setting. If you like creepy, cool, fun, puzzling, or challenging dungeon encounters, don't miss out on this!
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : Work with Other Publishers
June 22, 2020
An online-only PaizoCon had a few wrinkles, but one of the best parts was being able to set up an "Ask Me Anything" thread for anyone to drop in and ask me questions about what I do. One question I received from Andrew Mullen strikes me as a great question a lot of people probably have:
What's the biggest—or what're the co-biggest—stumbling blocks you see from new adventure authors?
And here's my (mostly unedited) response to that:
Erratic party assumptions! Too many new writers assume all p...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
June 9, 2020
Professionally, I’m a game developer. I focus on developing adventures. That means outlining adventures and assigning writing to freelancers, checking freelancers’ milestones, and developing the freelancer’s text before sending it to the editors. Let’s break those three things down! Finally, the development.
This is the bulk of my job. I’m taking turnover text that you, the freelancer, give to me, and I’m giving it a thorough edit, called a development edit (to distinguish it from ...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
May 28, 2020
Professionally, I’m a game developer. I focus on developing adventures. That means outlining adventures and assigning writing to freelancers, checking freelancers’ milestones, and developing the freelancer’s text before sending it to the editors. Let’s break those three things down! Second, the milestone.
What A Milestone Is. A milestone is a check-in point where I’ve asked you, the freelancer, to turn in about half your word count. This is to make sure you’re on track, and to make...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
May 25, 2020
Professionally, I’m a game developer. I focus on developing adventures. That means outlining adventures and assigning writing to freelancers, checking freelancers’ milestones, and developing the freelancer’s text before sending it to the editors. Let’s break those three things down! First, the outline.
I work with a lot of internal stakeholders to come up with a project outline that I give to my freelancers. Because I work on the Pathfinder Adventure Path line, the projects I’m outl...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
May 22, 2020
So, I wanted to talk about how feedback a developer gives you as a freelancer is going to range from the exceptionally specific to the exceptionally general. I know when I give feedback, this is nearly always the case. And I thought an example would be helpful, but I don't feel comfortable sharing the feedback I've given to others. Instead, here's some feedback I got myself!
Back in 2013 / 2014, I wrote
The Choking Tower, the third adventure in the Iron Gods Adventure Path. James Jacobs gave m...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
May 19, 2020
If you're writing for RPGs, it's pretty likely you'll get asked to turn over a "milestone" about halfway through the process. This is basically a midpoint check-in, where you show you've got about half the word count completed. But a milestone can and should be a greater opportunity for that for you, the freelancer, to interface with your developer. What makes a good milestone?
*
Word Count. What is "about half" of your word count? Anywhere near 50 percent is fine, so long as it's showing good...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
May 14, 2020
I was looking over a conversation about the "metal levels" on DriveThruRPG, the most significant site for digital RPG sales. These levels (Copper, Silver, Gold, and so on) correspond with sales: higher sales get rarer metals.
I've felt lucky if some of my third party press products even get Copper rated, but I was surprised to find that I actually have three Platinum products! All three adventures I wrote for the D&D Adventurer's League campaign (Beneath the Fetid Chelimber, The Seer, and Quel...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : Wizards of the Coast
May 13, 2020
I've released my next solo adventure, a conversion to my popular Night of the Skulltaker for solo play. You can get it
right here!
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : Announcements
May 12, 2020
As an adventure writer, I like to think that the story comes first, and is the most vital thing I'm providing. Sure, there are monsters, but you can go get those stats in a monster book (whether a
Monster Manual, a
Bestiary, or an
Alien Archive). The same with traps; something in the core rulebook is something you can look up yourself. Maps are often really important to tell the story, but you can draw those out yourself, or print the ones I include in the adventure. You've got all the tokens...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips
May 6, 2020
In Pathfinder First Edition, it was pretty common to see results broken up by 5s. Failed to climb that wall? If you failed by 5 or more, you'll fall. Failed to disable a trap? If you failed by 5 or more, you accidentally set it off. I saw plenty of tables, such as for information gathered while investigating something, that came in units of 5: If you got a result of 15 or higher on your Perception/Diplomacy/whatever, you learned X. If you got a 20 or higher, you also learned Y. If you got a 2...
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Posted by Ron Lundeen. Posted In : RPGWriterTips